tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post7605915737301910657..comments2024-01-14T23:46:44.064+00:00Comments on Musings of an Aspiring Scribe: Writerly Wednesday: Daniel's SnowcaveTaleihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-57788707277944605952010-10-17T06:01:18.965+01:002010-10-17T06:01:18.965+01:00Remenber the Insolent tongue beneath those soft pa...Remenber the Insolent tongue beneath those soft parted lips. Oh, but he won't. Great imagery. Great writing. Have a peaceful Sunday.Manzanitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06467261212623663365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-39179851916493988272010-10-15T21:31:25.467+01:002010-10-15T21:31:25.467+01:00@ Kelly, thank you dear lady, I shall be right ove...@ Kelly, thank you dear lady, I shall be right over! ;)<br /><br />@Jackee - thanks so much, I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!! Makes me smile!<br /><br />@Jude, ooh it's chilly outside but the fire in the cave will keep our lovely characters warm, for now. ;) Thank you for the lovely feedback too! ;)Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-90460362810649659982010-10-15T04:42:07.160+01:002010-10-15T04:42:07.160+01:00IS IT JUST ME, OR DID IT GET CHILLY IN HERE?! Hehe...IS IT JUST ME, OR DID IT GET CHILLY IN HERE?! Hehe the atmosphere totally comes to life :)Judehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04587172836433015426noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-87322153967676463422010-10-15T04:25:08.319+01:002010-10-15T04:25:08.319+01:00LOVE Ann and Olive! This was a great snippet--such...LOVE Ann and Olive! This was a great snippet--such tone and tension. :o)<br /><br />Well done, Talei!Jackeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03351019926958000627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-29982984599954157822010-10-14T23:07:10.209+01:002010-10-14T23:07:10.209+01:00Just popped back over to let you know that I have ...Just popped back over to let you know that I have an award for you at my blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-63851086577870357262010-10-14T20:39:46.461+01:002010-10-14T20:39:46.461+01:00@Poppies & Sunshine - you are too kind! Thank ...@Poppies & Sunshine - you are too kind! Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;)<br /><br />@Talli - thank you dear lady - so happy you loved it!! xTaleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-75675857977635980582010-10-14T18:01:10.045+01:002010-10-14T18:01:10.045+01:00Loved that snippet! So evocative and beutifully wr...Loved that snippet! So evocative and beutifully written.Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-31568603007521520932010-10-14T09:37:22.214+01:002010-10-14T09:37:22.214+01:00I enjoyed reading this! You are such a great write...I enjoyed reading this! You are such a great writer! I like the idea of making a story from a picture!Poppies and Sunshinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794995513595150842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-63027803151297184482010-10-14T07:58:59.705+01:002010-10-14T07:58:59.705+01:00@Michelle, thanks sweet! I enjoyed this writing p...@Michelle, thanks sweet! I enjoyed this writing prompt,and the website is a great help. I quite agree! ;)<br /><br />@Kelly, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.;)<br /><br />@Mya, hello dear. ;) I can be enticed to write more, very happy you liked this one. <br /><br />And yes long legs are a superpower!! I just need a pair of those with the wings and all will be well with the world. ;)Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-80130655863050751872010-10-14T03:21:45.058+01:002010-10-14T03:21:45.058+01:00Hmmm, nice fade out? Will there be a continuing sn...Hmmm, nice fade out? Will there be a continuing snippet? Can we vote on that?<br />I am left in this moment, and viewing the scene looking over his shoulder.<br /><br />Answering one of your questions from your Oct. 6 post about superpower - I think I will just swap any superpower for those kind of long legs.<br /> actually I think long legs are superpowerMyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03065742730008687282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-28517813957396792652010-10-14T03:21:05.788+01:002010-10-14T03:21:05.788+01:00This is very sweet. I like it!This is very sweet. I like it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-56673315684392207012010-10-14T02:56:07.893+01:002010-10-14T02:56:07.893+01:00beautiful. thanks for telling about the writing pr...beautiful. thanks for telling about the writing prompts. i think i'll try one. plus their website is a great resource.Michelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-70533416845102324752010-10-14T00:44:01.196+01:002010-10-14T00:44:01.196+01:00Thank you dear lady! ;)Thank you dear lady! ;)Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-10386714493964119472010-10-14T00:37:13.215+01:002010-10-14T00:37:13.215+01:00Nice - short and sweet. :)Nice - short and sweet. :)DL Curranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11386303187160819147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-26109367392245714892010-10-14T00:12:53.488+01:002010-10-14T00:12:53.488+01:00Oh thank you Writing Nut! ;))Oh thank you Writing Nut! ;))Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-80555372883653371452010-10-14T00:01:58.584+01:002010-10-14T00:01:58.584+01:00Very nicely done!Very nicely done!WritingNuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16326756274887055685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-39792579286782040282010-10-13T22:24:32.010+01:002010-10-13T22:24:32.010+01:00@Joanna - oh but he will try and deny it for as lo...@Joanna - oh but he will try and deny it for as long as possible. ;)<br /><br />@Bish - thanks honey! ;)Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-9697854660460028562010-10-13T22:18:16.108+01:002010-10-13T22:18:16.108+01:00Sweet.Sweet.Bish Denhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13359927719391990534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8590413918586199527.post-40622984024981780632010-10-13T21:05:17.061+01:002010-10-13T21:05:17.061+01:00Ha ha good luck Daniel her lips have already mesme...Ha ha good luck Daniel her lips have already mesmerized you, there is no way you are giving her up and you know it.Joanna St. Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06180782095853911283noreply@blogger.com