Last night I dreamt

I was falling down

Through the ocean

My hair swirling all around

Cold salty liquid drawing me in

My fingers reached above my head

Releasing bubbles that coat my skin

Down I fell

Towards the sand

And as I went I felt this peace

A light above me

Giving release

Let go old life

Farewell dear friend

I listened quietly as waves lulled my fears

Hold me closer, I said

My blue sea

Grant me





Falling © 2010 T.Loto. All rights reserved.
Photocredits via weheartit

A/N: I hope everyone's week is coming along swimmingly!  Sometimes I feel like waves are rushing me, other times its as though I'm floating, drifting through the hours, the minutes, the seconds.  How is your week thus far?


  1. What a great poem! I definitely feel like I'm floating at the moment, in a very good way :)

  2. revisions. not what I would call fun.

  3. This is beautiful!

  4. Lovely poem Talei I think you struck gold with this one

  5. Wow. That poem was amazing. Loved it!!!

    My week is going ok - I keep indulging in too much holiday food!

  6. I love this poem. :)

    My week's going well, thanks for asking!

  7. Closing doors and opening new ones. Your passage seem so peaceful, lovely, luring.

  8. When you have a chance, Talei, I've a little something for you at my place.

  9. Talei,
    You are multi talented as writer and poet. I'm so happy to know you. I wish you and your little one Christmas blessings. Go forth and conquer the world!!!
    Manzi xo xo

  10. Candy, thank you! ;)

    Meredith, lovely to hear, we like floating in a good way! ;)

    MsHatch, I'm hearing you on that one! In the middle of mine too and I could be sometime. Good luck with yours!

    Kelly, thank you my dear! ;)

    Jo, cheers lovely - so glad you enjoyed it. ;)

    Melissa, thanks so much, I'm chuffed you loved it. And we writers must keep up our strength with all our imagination, we need sustenance! Go forth and devour all those Xmas treats. ;)

    Golden Eagle, thank you my dear! Good to hear!!

    Mya, you hit it on the nail, its precisely that. Decisions, a time for change, closing old chapters and opening new ones. Absolutely. x

    Kittie, thank you, I shall pop over shortly ;)

    Al, thanks so much. ;)

    Manzanita, you're so kind. Thank you dear friend, its great to know you too! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas with your loved ones too. ;) xox

  11. every fork inthe road leads to a new beginning (and another fork!)...

    very nice Talei!

  12. Hi Pat, thanks so much. There are so many forks in life! Glad you enjoyed. ;)


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